![]() ![]() Not sure what you mean here either, can you say this a bit more clearer? More elaboration. Make the transition from the preparation for the tour and album, to the death more gradual.and it wanted to launch her -> and they wanted to.and expanded the 'Tejano Music Movement' -> You are writing it in quotes as if there was some special band or club like that promoting Tejano music.If that is so, then you donot need to explicitly say it like this. that were remixed with a Caribbean influence from the dance hall and reggae genres -> this is not clear, why and how is Caribbean being incorporated into dance hall and reggae? Because those two music genres originated in the Caribbeans.Not sure what you mean here? If I put a period after the date then should I remove EMI Records and EMI Latin? and was released on July 18, -> Break into a new sentence from there.If recording locations are not available,then just give the date range, which by the way should be 1994–95 and not how it is, per MOS:DATERANGE. Various recording locations is just vague.Per WP:IBX, remove that internal wikilink to release and history from infobox.Anyways, hope you enjoy reading and if there are any remaining issues, I'll fix them asap -) Best and happy holidays, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 16:06, 4 December 2011 (UTC) DAB/EL Atta boi! - Legolas ( talk 2 me) 15:52, 4 December 2011 (UTC) Awww thanks for that :-) Well I'm glad that I've improved over the years while being on Wikipedia. I know what happened with all the block and those bull-shit, but even then you have come back with full-force. Thanks for reviewing, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 15:50, 4 December 2011 (UTC) Your dedication towards Selena articles really impress me. Legolas ( talk 2 me) 15:41, 4 December 2011 (UTC) How to mod skyrim. ![]()
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